Fall Months, 2024

Looking Glass Falls — Pisgah National Forest, Brevard, North Carolina
Haiku is a Japanese poetry form
that consists of three lines
and seventeen syllables,
five on the first and third lines,
and seven on the middle line.

Traditionally, it would be about some aspect
of the natural world,
and would typically express/reflect
one of the four seasons of the year.

My fave is by Ryusui:
A lost child crying
stumbling over the dark fields...
pursuing fireflies


The trick is you won't be arrested
for pursuing any subject matter
in Haiku form.

My sister-in-law
brings noise to life in my life,
trashing my silence.


And the three lines,
seventeen syllables
will force you to think about
how to say what needs to be said,
focusing you on what needs to be said,
which is a discipline
that will open you to your own possibilities
in surprising and revealing ways.

I invite you to take up the practice
and see where it goes.

Published by jimwdollar

I'm retired, and still finding my way--but now, I don't have to pretend that I know what I'm doing. I retired after 40.5 years as a minister in the Presbyterian Church USA, serving churches in Louisiana, Mississippi and North Carolina. I graduated from Austin Presbyterian Theological Seminary, in Austin, Texas, and Northwestern State University in Natchitoches, Louisiana. My wife, Judy, and I have three daughters, five granddaughters, one great granddaughter, and a great grandson on the way, within about ten minutes from where we live--and are enjoying our retirement as much as we have ever enjoyed anything.

2 thoughts on “Fall Months, 2024

  1. I suspect, you can learn a lot about yourself from the noise which you perceive coming from your SIL 🙂
    I have my own version of that in my life, but I reluctantly admit, that my ‘biggest’ learning opportunities come from that noise (I do not enjoy or like it, but there it is) 🙂

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